tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post4440965449757112773..comments2023-06-04T08:46:35.240-04:00Comments on Life with a Flourish!: First Draft & BlogfestA.J. Freyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15490138130935376612noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-38380053779404130352010-04-11T19:48:38.912-04:002010-04-11T19:48:38.912-04:00Loved his matter of fact manner!Loved his matter of fact manner!Lorel Claytonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06749366331989131894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-63412547950555857562010-04-11T01:33:38.731-04:002010-04-11T01:33:38.731-04:00Great scene. Your novel is going to a joy to read...Great scene. Your novel is going to a joy to read.<br /><br />........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-76301602237295363462010-04-10T22:57:27.958-04:002010-04-10T22:57:27.958-04:00I love this! Adam's approach to killing the va...I love this! Adam's approach to killing the vampire is methodical and you can tell it's not his first time. Had you not revealed he was forensic biologist, I would have thought he had a medical background of sorts because of the anatomy terms. You really got into character with this one!EJ Fechendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05300369395930503020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-71709586883710261342010-04-10T22:03:12.154-04:002010-04-10T22:03:12.154-04:00Your hero is so cold and matter of fact about the ...Your hero is so cold and matter of fact about the killing - I know the whole kill or be killed thing - he was a bit chilly. The use of the childish rhyme I wonder if his reasons include a child he lost?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-8014012516049446242010-04-10T21:55:29.303-04:002010-04-10T21:55:29.303-04:00Loved your scene--especially the handle and spout ...Loved your scene--especially the handle and spout comments. Very vivid--could see the images in my mind. Bravo!Courtney Reesehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05027695819270602098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-34833466389692166132010-04-10T20:43:06.242-04:002010-04-10T20:43:06.242-04:00"Here is your handle." "And now you..."Here is your handle." "And now you will spout."<br /><br />Great stuff :)TLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01613912638668399684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-83902604864835991442010-04-10T17:32:25.983-04:002010-04-10T17:32:25.983-04:00I love the very end, it's a great wrap up to t...I love the very end, it's a great wrap up to this scene of what seems to be a very every-day event for this character. Great characterization in the midst of murder.Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-9288064486817354012010-04-10T17:19:42.625-04:002010-04-10T17:19:42.625-04:00First of all, I love your website design. ;) Seco...First of all, I love your website design. ;) Second of all, I like that the conversation is very matter of fact over the gruesome violence that just happened. Chilling.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-31460532554363566072010-04-10T16:45:44.469-04:002010-04-10T16:45:44.469-04:00Nice, but where's the murder? Thought vamps we...Nice, but where's the murder? Thought vamps were kinda already dead...<br /><br />Nice description of the murder...wouldn't want to alarm her!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-22585408524038183222010-04-10T14:34:26.117-04:002010-04-10T14:34:26.117-04:00Nice job, Alicia! Thanks for posting!Nice job, Alicia! Thanks for posting!Anne Rileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15142671531881407934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-39676968559457522892010-04-10T12:03:47.365-04:002010-04-10T12:03:47.365-04:00Nice! Love the action in this scene, and Bristow&...Nice! Love the action in this scene, and Bristow's character seems interesting. Well done!Shelley Slyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07981620646634240160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-48575250818571913682010-04-10T09:38:02.406-04:002010-04-10T09:38:02.406-04:00Great scene. But this?
I prefer to keep them atta...Great scene. But this?<br /><br /><em>I prefer to keep them attached. Less pieces to keep up with.</em><br /><br />I love that. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-54217293555805791092010-04-10T09:37:53.413-04:002010-04-10T09:37:53.413-04:00I love that line -- "we got us one dead vamp&...I love that line -- "we got us one dead vamp" great job.Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-35018959307593814572010-04-10T09:18:28.979-04:002010-04-10T09:18:28.979-04:00Wow, death by boot heel and blade! That's a gr...Wow, death by boot heel and blade! That's a great scene.Aubriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10884036126491922530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762350475694970261.post-81171672586145970772010-04-10T09:09:20.119-04:002010-04-10T09:09:20.119-04:00You have to do what works best for you. Happy writ...You have to do what works best for you. Happy writing!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com