For Valentine's Day, I was torn between two great blog hops. So, I decided to do both.
The first is the Indie-kissing blogfest hosted by the Indelibles. The excerpt I chose is from my newest WIP, The Wish. This scene is all about the kiss, so I will not bother you with any backstory. Hope you enjoy.
In Nate’s eyes, Amanda sees her future. He is like a pair
of blue jeans in a world full of suits, a comfortableness that she hasn’t felt
before. It has been years since she has been ignited with passion.
The night wind dances in her hair. The moon
glistens off the pavement. Her mind runs through every reason why she shouldn’t
be with him, but his chocolate eyes are melting her resolve. His luscious, pink
lips look like a perfect landing pad if she would allow herself to fall.
He eases towards her, as
if he heard her thoughts.
She slides her bottom lip between her teeth, biting down,
making sure that her mouth is awake. Her body is tingling, a deep burn.
“I shouldn’t,” he exhales with a trail of breath that
tickles her cheek.
“We really shouldn’t,” she whispers back.
He pauses.
She leans in closer.
He closes his eyes, and then the gap between them.
His lips are as soft as she’d imagined. The kiss
starts gentle, slow, as if he is afraid he will break her. Her face is a
porcelain egg that he cradles between his hands. He pulls back, looks into her
eyes, and then leans into her once more. The kiss catches fire.
The next blog hop is very different. So, maybe you should get a drink of water and cleanse your palet before continuing to read. Precious Monsters is hosting a Vampire Bite blog hop. Given that my first novel, Iron Thirst, is all about vampires -- it was a given that I would participate. The excerpt is actually the prologue. Adam Bristow sets the scene...
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The night has just begun when I spot Gabriel
locking his sights on his first victim. His trance-inducing stare caught her
the moment she stepped into the bar. If he has his way, the curvaceous blonde
will be in his bed in under an hour, and shortly after her blood will be staining
his lips.
Thursday night at DragonCon is when most of the
guests check into their hotels and start the weekend with a drink in hand. For
me, the first night of Con is when I begin my patrol while the out-of-towners
descend upon our city. I’m not worried about the geeks, the costumed fans, or
the party animals. My concern is very specific--those who are removing their
disguises. Vampires get this weekend to be themselves, but there are rules, and
this bloodsucker is dangerously close to breaking the first one--aggravating
me.
His fangs are protruding, turned on by the
blue-eyed soon-to-be donor. She doesn’t blink as she gravitates towards him.
What irks me is that she’s an unwilling snack. There will be plenty of those,
but I ain’t going to stand by and watch. She may be walking to him on her own
two feet, but the brain in her head belongs to him.
What a lovely time to buy my dear old pal a drink.
“Hello, Gabriel.” I step between them, breaking
their eye contact and the hold he has over her. The bastard snarls at me. “Run
along, love,” I tell the blonde over my shoulder.
She blinks a few times, lets out a heavy sigh,
then scurries along to look for her friends.
When I glance back, Gabriel has painted a smile on
his face. “Bristow, if you continue to chase off my dinner then I will be
forced to believe you are volunteering.” He leans in close. “Although, you’re
not my taste. Your blood is much too bitter.”
No one likes a clever vampire. I pull the unlit
pipe from my lips, and raise an eyebrow at him. “You’re not threatening me now,
are ya?”
His smile vanishes. “I was not harming anyone, nor
am I breaking any of your precious rules.”
“That’s debatable, and I’m not really up to the
debate. So, just behave yourself and you’ll live, well--exist, to see your two
hundredth birthday.”
“Ahh, you flatter me, but I am not nearly that
old.” His eyes flicker to a spot over my shoulder.
“Why, I recall my
two hundredth birthday. So long ago,” I hear from behind me. The smooth
Egyptian voice climbs up my spine like a spider. “I was a proud fighter
alongside Sultan Al-Kamil the night we sustained Cairo. Those Christian boys
looked just as surprised then as you do now.”
My fingers instinctively dance towards the butt of
the gun holstered under my jacket, but Zamir’s hand is on my wrist before I can
blink. “And Adam, what are you? A whole thirty-five? And heart still beating?
Such a shame. We could help with that risky little problem.”
I jerk my hand free from his grasp. “I’ll keep my
ticker tocking, thank you.”
I’m a rather smart bloke. I wouldn’t still be
alive if I wasn’t. So allowing a thousand-year-old vamp to sneak up on me is
just piss poor form. I turn to see the dark-skinned vampire, fangs extended,
staring back at me. I haven’t seen Zamir in nearly ten years, and if I’m being
honest, I ain’t thrilled at seeing him now. I take a step back so they are both
in my sight. A vampire in periphery is an open invitation to empty veins.
“What brings you to Atlanta?” I ask Zamir, rubbing
my palm over the prickly stubble that is my hair.
“You a Stargate fan, or is Buffy more your style?”
“Ah, my
dearest Bristow, you do not seem happy to see me. No matter. Many of my progeny
look expectantly upon this weekend, and I find myself wondering what all the
chatter is about. Thought I would come and see for myself.”
Rubbish, I’m
sure. “I’m on my early rounds making sure everyone keeps it copasetic. We
want all the humans’ hearts beating and the secret safe. We got rules in this
area. So, keep it peaceful.”
As I turn to walk away, Zamir says, “Adam, we are
aware of your so-called rules, but I have my own laws that govern my actions
and the actions of my people that take precedence over the lawyer’s little
treaty. Maybe you should run along and check the more recent additions to our
world.”
I hate the way his words crawl over my skin. I
glance at Gabriel’s smug face, grinning as if he’s getting away with something.
I didn’t work so hard on my reputation to allow a measly hundred-fifty-year-old
vamp to get the better of me. I’d love nothing more than to knock him arse over
elbow, but starting a fight on the first night over something as silly as pride
would not be my best bet. Not without back up. Currently, the rest of my team
is patrolling the other three hotels.
If the humans knew what was swarming DragonCon,
they might have just stayed home behind locked doors. Not that a flimsy door
would keep the monsters out.
For more excerpts from Iron Thirst, please click here.
Great similes in your first piece--makes it so vivid. And LOVE the wry voice in your second piece. It has a --dare I say it?-- Joss Whedon feel that's a wonderful mix of fun and serious.
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's one heck of a compliment. :-)
DeleteWhat a lovely sweet piece - I love the porcelain egg!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteExcellent excerpts and a wonderful way to participate in both blog hops!
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you, A. J., via the VBBH!
Thank you. Nice to meet you too!
Delete...The kiss catches fire... I like that. =)
ReplyDeleteI bounced over here from the Vampire Blog Hop - I like the scene setting :)
ReplyDeleteKnowing many "geeks, costumed fans, and party animals" I think if they knew "what was swarming DragonCon" they'd be there all the faster ;). Loved the snippets.
ReplyDeleteHey there! Thanks for sharing your excerpt and for participating in the Vampire Bite Blog Hop!!
ReplyDelete"The kiss catches fire." I love that line!
ReplyDeleteTwo great FF pieces!!!
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